However,
one sees through the poem a more elaborate expression of sadness at a
frustrated ambition. An ambition to enjoy fully the scenic view of the
beautiful Hills, and the glittering patches of sandy islands dotted
along the breath and length of the breathtaking flows of a river that
flowed round the academic community of an institution he had once sort
an academic opportunity in. As a student of the tertiary institution,
he would have had his ambition fulfilled. But for circumstances beyond
him he found himself denied of that rare opportunity. No
wonder the piece went ahead to make it to the semi-finalist of the
International Society of Poets ''
Poetry Competition" and
equally went on
to win an "Outstanding Achievement in Poetry Crystal Award Trophy." The
author was subsequently nominated as an associate ambassador of poet to
the International Society of Poets. He equally received a gold
Medallion in recognition of his creative ingenuity. Above all, he was
presented with a $300 worth crystal trophy, a $100 coupon for the
upcoming 2008 International Society of Poets edition, with free one
year subscription to the Poets magazine. All this took place at the 27th Las Vegas
in Nevada U.S.A. International Society of Poets (ISP) Convention, 2007
edition held between July 19-22 2007 at the prestigious Rivera Hotel in
the beautiful and one of the world''s famous Cities, The
author hereby solicits and he is privileged to honor you with a rare
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Goodbye Hills and Shores
by: Kartel Onyekachi Chidiagba
Goodbye Hills and Shores
Like glue, wished you by my side.
Came rallying for you my diva, so
sonorous as serenade. The stunning vista
of an Idyll serenity ever an astonishment.
The beauteous nubile of my wet dream
wonderlands.
So close as the citadel of my heart.
I had fought like a warrior, but in vain,
To be admitted near you, my utmost
aspiration. No matter my merits, no matter
my applications was denied the quest
How with my sores-of-feet dream to
paddle. Sort for your pleasures and gentle
calmness. My Heart Steaming in-love
My back against your wetness dreaming to sun
I wave back in tears at your lush of green
Receding into the distance. Eye pictured
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