MY FIRST LOVE

Book Review by: absquite

Original Author: ABHIJIT

Summary rating: 5 stars (2 Ratings)
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MY FIRST LOVE
JADED WITH MY LIFE WHEN I LOOK BACK
THE SIGHT COMES TO MY MIND WHEN I WAS TAKEN ABACK
HER AQUAMARINE EYES ,HER NUBILE BODY PARTS
HAD PROFUSELY DUG A HOLE IN MY HEART.
    THE BLONDED HAIRS SHYING DOWN HER FACE
    AND HER STRAWBERRY LIPS FOR GOD''''S GRACE
    THAT CUTE SMILE OF HER THAT GAVE RISE TO THOSE DIMPLES
    AND ON HER CHEEKS KEPT SHINING THOSE PRETTY PIMPLES.
ANYBODY COULD HAVE DIED
FOR THOSE VERY GLANCES OF THINE
WHICH OPINED THAT SHE WAS MINE ,MINE AND ONLY MINE
THAT VERY FEELING WAS AS GENTLE AS A DOVE
AND IT TOOK ME YEARS TO KNOW THAT SHE WAS
                                          MY FIRST LOVE.........
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Published: February 24, 2008

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0 Ratings Sunday, February 24, 2008
1
Saurabh

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sweet and lovable i would say
0 Ratings Sunday, February 24, 2008
2
Saurabh

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sweet and lovable i would say
0 Ratings Sunday, February 24, 2008
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Saurabh

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sweet and lovable i would say
0 Ratings Tuesday, March 04, 2008
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ravi prakash

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why me only ? everyone will fall in love after reading this .