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portrait of denial

Book Review by: tantoy    

Original Author: tan
here i am
with my pretty smile
and all i ask
was to stay for awhile
i wanted her to hug me
but she said
was let go of me
i'd given her evrything
though all i have was nothing
ive done all my best
but all things has got into rest
i know im such a losser
maybe without me
things would better
we even made plans together but
now im facing my future without her...
and i given her evrything thouhg all i have was nothing
and ive done all my best...
but all things has just got into rest...
goodbye beautiful, goodbye my heart
parting ways is such a sweet sorrow
i just dont know what to do
and im so numb
im having a hard time to breath
what should i do..
just take away the pain that's inside of me..
help me to forget my tornment
lead me to a place where i can breath in a place where i can scream that finaly im free
from suffering
Published: December 13, 2007
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  1. 0 Ratings Thursday, December 13, 2007
    1

    Pammie

    Malungkot ka ba??

    ang lungkot ng poem mu... yet great talent. sana nxt time yung masaya naman..

  2. 0 Ratings Friday, December 21, 2007
    2

    steph

    u got the heart

    lhufet

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