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A Shattered Vision; From My Poetic Diary

Book Review by: mrssaunders    

Original Author: Casthra Demosthene
I have a shattered vision of the world
And the people in it
I don't see it as crystal clear as they do
I
see the cracks in between
And the ugly all around.
Many designate what they want to see
Its indolent for them to close their eyes shut
When so much discomfort
and resentment surrounds them.
They sugar coat the truth
in order to fir their content allusion of reality.
I've tried their fantasy world
funny how I don't perform well in it.
I stumbled and tumbled through the flaws in their perfect world.
I'm not saying that beauty doesn't exist within these world
Because even with a shatterd vision
I see the beauty in them
and the underraated love that exist in all of us.
10-02-06
Published: March 26, 2007
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  1. 0 Ratings Thursday, March 29, 2007
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    Jessic Hill

    Touching

    this poem examplifly originality, its beautyiful written and captivating. the author had me at the first word and held on to me to the very last word.

  2. 0 Ratings Tuesday, April 03, 2007
    2

    Bill

    Simple

    I like this poem, it was simple and real. cool

  3. 0 Ratings Tuesday, April 03, 2007
    3

    Nerdy

    clap for the author

    she's done it again!

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